I enjoyed that you provided text above each scene, I thought that was helpful in telling the story. I am just a little confused on the last scene, are the two individuals leaving a restaurant where the daughter left behind the hair clip? Also appears to me that they are just about to walk in.
The Materials of History, Thought, and Art 
Hi ShirEl,
I liked the art style and story captured by your hair clip. Sorry to hear that it got left behind
I enjoyed that you provided text above each scene, I thought that was helpful in telling the story. I am just a little confused on the last scene, are the two individuals leaving a restaurant where the daughter left behind the hair clip? Also appears to me that they are just about to walk in.